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I need a good first paragraph and title about why my biggest fear is snakes2007-11-24 2:01:04

"Snakes alive, Snakes dead, keep those things away from my head!"

I hate snakes because of all the movies and horror stories about snakes. their fangs.. their venom.the ability they have to squish you.. I'd go on, but then you'd have to read my paper.

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first of all don't write about how slimy they are. because they're not.. secondly don't write "discusting" .. because that's not even spelled right.

if you're going to write an opening.. a good way to start is to start broad. talk about fears in general. mention some fears and why some people have a fear of this or that. or mention the point of this essay in some way (like the prompt you were given). then say, for whatever reason, fears are a natural part of being human. or something similar to that. then narrow it down to a saying that you have a fear of snakes.

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Title: Life with Ophidiophobia

Sounds like a bd skin disease, doesn't it? Although not many people recognize the name, many suffer with it. Ophidiophobia is the fear of snakes. I first noticed I was afraid of snakes.

Opening with a definition is one of the easiest ways to get the attention of the reader and make you sound well informed. There are lots of good web-sites on this issue. Search Fear of Snakes and brainstorm-then organize your outline. Good Luck

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Title- Ophidiophobia ( The proper name for a fear of snakes)